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Review:heidi_gurrl says:
This girl is completely DEPRESSED - She honestly just needs someone to show her that there is more to life than boys, love, pain and depression. She needs someone to prove to her that she can have the same happ feelings outside of a relationship. i.e. Get her into a new hobby or introduce her to some new people. And if she reeally likes male company that much, why can't she just be FRIENDS with the guys???

And I know people will say I'm being insensitive but honestly, I'm not! I suffered from serious depression from when my parents divorced (I was twelve) right up untill the year before last. (I was sixteen!) And it wasn't easy to get through, believe me. So, um . . . There are some suggestions on what Ginny, Hermione & co. could do to help Jackie.

With love, Heidi. xoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox

Author's Response: Okay so I made Jacqueline for my friend- well to me she is my friend except she has a different name and she goes to Hogwarts. I can't say that I'll for sure change anything about the story or any of the future chapters.

Jacqueline doesn't really... hmm... like male company as much as it seems I guess? I didn't mean to make her look like that.

With Draco it was her first... love. And I mean her first real love. And so I had to make her depression with him seem absolutely horrible. And she is friends with guys its just she seems to be falling for the ones who she isn't meant to be with (?)

So as you know- since you must've read the other chapter- she has men issues. And actually I don't put that in as much as I should. See I make Jackie seem alright with guys but most kids who are hit- or see someone being hit when they are growing up or even after- usually have (whatever the gender is male or female) issues.

Uhm... well with the male company liking thing uh...

As I said before she is friends with most of her guy friends and guys in general but I mean if you think about it I only mentioned her having a liking for two guys so far and well... this is like high school I guess- can one live without a boyfriend throughout high school? Yes but I haven't mentioned Jacqueline having a boyfriend yet- so there is the question has she ever had a boyfriend? She's in her sixth year and well... yea I can't say much about that subject yet... but it would be hard. Well for some no, but for her yes.

Anyway as I was saying- she does have like... wow... like urges? Uhm... yes and well I guess im saying that I don't think that I make her seem as if she thinks guys are everything and all that good stuff. I mean yea I don't think she does- because truthfully she doesn't.

Uh okay with your suggestions- new hobby, new people- love it but as I said in the beginning im not changing much of the story.

And by the way I so don't think your being insensitive.

Wow I really tried to answer this review... I think it was an epic fail... I don't know. I'm bad with responding sometimes.

Oh and one last thing- I might've already said this but I don't remember- you said that someone needs to show her that there is more than boys, love, pain, and depression. Well I mean of course there is but what she's been through, going through, seen and knows is just... well I haven't said everything she knows or seen or any of that YET... so it may seem a little confusing perhaps.

But yes... so I am kind of saying that she does know that- but all she basically experiences is love and pain and depression(because of boys and other things,) and most of the pain and depression she does feel is like held in from what her dad did to her.

So with all that I hope I answered this review fairly well.

Thanks so much for reviewing!


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