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Review:Groundswell says:
All those misunderstandings! I'm not surprised they have problems getting along when they keep hurting each other eithout knowing it. Why not just sit down and talk for a while? :P
I love how Sirius seems to be the one fixing it all.
I'm wondering, if Lily got the potion, why didn't she go straight to the Hospital Wing instad of waiting til the next day? It seemed that James' condition was pretty serious, and one would have thought that she'd go right away.
I think it's a bit fast Lily and James started dating. After all, the story takes place over only a couple of days, and in my head that's not nearly long enough time for the to date. Become friends, yes surely, but the other thing is just moving too fast.
I think you've written a fine short story which I found quite amusing. I like that you skipped around in the scenes (which I'm normally not one for), and you kept unnecessary details out of the way.
Well done!

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