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Review:Groundswell says:
I think Lily is so sweet when she's confused or scared. Much like she is here about visiting James. She just needs a little push. Which Sirius is the perfect person to give her.
Again, I like how you only have got what matters in this story and skip all those unnecessary scenes. It's so nice and a thing some people would have to do a bit more often :P
I think your Severus was a bit out of character. He wasn't calm and collected enough, and he suddenly blurted out his love confession for Lily. It just didn't seem like the Snape we know.
Sirius, on the other hand, was lovely. You write him very well in a great way. He's so great and charming one can't help loving him.
Another really good chapter. It was a nice read.

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