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Review:Groundswell says:
I think it was a very good first chapter.
I like that you take on several point of views, or scenes, not only following one person. It gives it a good view of what's going on everywhere int he entire story. And you seem to fit so much into one chapter, it's pretty impressive. (I'd never have been able to do so)
And being a huge canon follower, I have two things that're bothering me here. First, James Potter was a chaser, JKR have said so even though it says otherwise in the film. And second, I couldn't help to notice the line about Snape becoming Potionsmaster right after graduation. Looking it up, I found that he doesn't become so before another few years.
I'm a bit surprised that Sirius seems to change so fast. I mean, first he's extremely mad at Lily and later they're best buds, doing homework together.
Good first chapter. I really like it!

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