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Review:yliana says:
kind of porely written, but over all i kind of liked it. i tink you could defidently do with a epilogue of the tornadoes game on lilys birthday, 3 years to the future (when lily is "ready" for a serious relationship) or something so that we could have some closure on lilys and scorpious' relationship. over all really good. keep up the good work and dont stop writing!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad the poor writing didn't keep you from finishing it. There is a sequel. Probably wouldn't be worth your time if you didn't like the first, but it does give the closure you were talking about. I won't make excuses for the writing because I know it needs a great deal of work. I hope I've improved some in my later attempts, and I've tried doing a rewrite on this, but I just can't seem to stick to it. I'd rather just chalk this one up to experience and go on to write something better. Thanks for taking the time to review.


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