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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Here as requested. ^__^ Sorry it took me a bit to get here.

Ah, this was so great. So new and... refreshing, you know? It's nice to see a unique one-shot every once and a while, and this one definitely did it for me. Kudos to you for that.

I absolutely loved your first paragraph and the descriptions at the top. It highlights what the story's going to be about! It gives you a good impression. Like a good taste in your mouth after biting into a cake, right? XD Ha.

And your characterization stayed straight all the way through. Your character never fluctuated, never changed their feelings or actions. That sometimes bothers me in a one-shot, when a character acts one way and then says something totally different. So well done with that!

Wonderful wonderful wonderful. Really, it was a great fic, and thank you so much for requesting! 10/10

- Rin

Author's Response: Hi Rin!
Sorry it took me a few days to reply. I realized I had a major project due and had to drop everything to complete it ;) I do sincerely apologize for the delay.

Thank you so much for the fantastic review. I wasn't sure if the fic itself could be a stand-alone, as it is tied in with a novel of mine. Your comments, however, were so kind and encouraging ^_^

"Like a good taste in your mouth after biting into cake."-that's a great metaphor. I love it! Haha

Again, thanks for everything. I really appreciate your feedback. I hope you have a great week!

Best,
celticbard


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