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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
You've got me so hooked on this story - honestly. This story is so well-rounded, and it's not just some mindless story (though I do love those as well.) Instead of hilarious characters and situations (don't get me wrong, though, this story has got tons of those as well,) it's a good, thorough plot, and the need to know what happens next that keeps me reading these and dreading when I hit chapter 15, and have to wait for the next one.

If there was one weakness, I'd say it's probably character development. That's of course, respective to the rest of the story, which is just incredible -so in all actuality, your character development is quite good. I also think it's hard to grasp characterization exactly when you're only eight chapters in and have six different, complex two-sided characters to focus in on. So, judging by that, I'd say you're doing an incredible job. :D

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're hooked! I hope you do keep reading. So far you've seen the poor judgment and immaturity I promised, and there's an explosion of temper next chapter. ;)

Oh, god, the characters. I usually characterize extensively, so this is killing me. I hope to develop them more, because the plot has been so busy that there was really no chance. But I'm glad you think my 6 main characters are complex enough. =]

Thank you for another great review, and I hope you continue to read and enjoy!


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