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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

i thought that this was a wonderful start to a Dramione. you have a nice grasp on where you want to go with this and i think that you have a well-written, confident beginning. my only suggestion is to maybe lengthen this up a bit. things seemed to go by really fast and it would benefit if you slowed down and paced through things a bit more realistically.

overall though, i thought that this was an amazing start. as i mentioned before, you seem to know where things are going and i loved when i see that. you may know, but the rest of us can only begin to guess. wonderful job.

onto the second chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. The other chapters should get lenghty. It seems so much longer when I type it. LOL

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