Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Hermione Potter452 says:
hahah! i love the last line. i really like Avery's character. she's pretty cool. and James! he's freaking awesome. i'd love to have him as my quidditch captain. food at 11pm? heck yes! haha. Freddy-boy is quite an idiot. but lovable one at that. and Bink!! for some reason, i really love his character. he's witty and seems like he would be the cocky type, but he really isn't. he just kind of is. and then the whole thing about him being an only child and lookin out for the Potters is adorable. i'm a family-oriented freak too. i love his character.

and oh my merlin of merlins.

Im your brother. If you were going to do it you would have done it last year when I put red coloring into the lake to look like the Giant Squid died.

HAHAHAH!! i laughed SO hard at that! that line was HILARIOUS! looove it!!

i love love love the way this story is going! update soon!!

~ Danica

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I had sooo much fun writing this. James's character just cracks me up. This one is taking me a lot longer to write than Keep Away/Hide and Seek but I think it'll be worth it. Anyway, glad you like it!

...and I just posted yet another chapter to Hide and Seek.


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 646
Submit Report: