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Review:Cenright says:
Hmm, I wonder if Harry will confront Snape in any way about the Cervantes quote.

Also, it will be nice to see how you use someone who has a blank slate of a personality, as Lisa has. It will create a much nicer dynamic than Ron would.

I also wonder how quickly Harry and Hermione are going to progress. He has already broken the contact barrier; touch for the sake of touch. I mean although hair isn't an intimate location, it is much more personal than touching her hand or shoulder. I do believe that exploration would happen, but I'm not sure if you will start that mid-second year, or waiting till third year to do anything. Being starved for contact, it would think sooner than later, but I will have to watch closely to see what you do.

Author's Response: Hello there!

Thanks for such an extensive and thoughtful review =) I'll answer in the same order, so that you understand the reply.

I'm afraid Harry isn't ready to understand the meaning of the quote Snape recited. Hermione, however, knew it from reading Don Quixote but only understood the threatening, not the deeper meaning of fighting something that doesn't exist. They will understand it as they grow older, though.

I'm also glad to know you liked the idea of putting Lisa as a close friend to the kids. The main characters will continue to be Hermione and Harry, but Lisa is a much better informed Pureblood than Ron ever was, although both share the same prejudices against anything that isn't magical.

Any romantic activities between the kids will happen after they hit third year. For now, their physical closeness is due to caring and emotional attachment, and it will fade a little as soon as they start feeling "weird" with their touches. There will be a very chaste first-kiss during this Summer, however =D

I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses, and again thanks for posting your thoughts!

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