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Review:raveneye says:
This story made me feel so many emotions! Sadness for tura when harry found out her name, then for harry when...well most of the story that one. Confusion, fear, triumph. It was incredible. I enjoyed this much more than Deathly Hallows. Certaintly rather lucky of tura to die just before the two men in her life discovered each other. Must have saved some pretty long arguments. There are only two points i would criticise though. One is the rather blatant use of Lord of the rings references. I've read good crossovers, but i think that here it wasn't enough to be a crossover, and so too much for this story. There was Arthurian references too, but they fit in a lot more naturally. Although Morgan le Fay is rather a mouthful for a curse. Merlin/Mordred/Nimue slide off the tongue a lot more easily lol... The other thing is that there is a very large amount of muggle references. The one that really sticks in my mind is the one in which you say something about not pulling out the damping rods of a nuclear reactor. I find it hard to imagine any of the characters, except maybe a few muggleborns, actually knowing what a nuclear reactor was...But thats just my opinion. And I loved the way you slid in Heisenburg as a squib. That was excellent. I loved this story. Definatley one of my top three favourite stories/series on the site as of yet. Great work :-) I would love to see another novel-length story from you, not perhaps a sequel though, as this has such a nice ending. It would be nice if you could add a scene somewhere at the end to say what happened to ollivander and fortescue though. right. better stop writing this review so that you won't have to stay up all night reading it. Brilliant story, Absolutely loved it. 10 out of 5 stars :-) *

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