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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
This was really, really good. It seems to be the exact thing that happened when the Longbottoms are tortured, and the way you wrote Frank slowly losing his mind was great. You wrote him perfectly! I was also glad you mentioned Neville. There are many accounts, especially with Remus, Tonks, Alice and Frank, where they don't mention the parent realizing that they're losing a kid, which I don't like. All four adults were great people, great parents, so I was glad you had Frank think about Neville there for a second.

There was only one typo (bravo): "I tear falls from my eye, the fluid dripping onto her robes."

It was a really interesting story, and I haven't read a ton of Frank POVs, but you wrote him incredibly well. Nice work!

~lllb

Author's Response: Actually, I almost fell into the trap of forgetting Neville, but then as I went through it I realised it didnt make sense without him.

Thanks for pointing out the typo, I'll change that right away :)

thank you so much! :D

- Marina


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