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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hello Marina, I'm here to review. Sorry for the delay :]

Okay, first off I'd like to say that I found the POV of this story fitting. I know in the last review I put that I wasn't fond of first person, but this was too rich. There was something about the first person narrative that just entangled itself delightfully with the story. The POV and the storyline fit perfectly. It touched me deeply. The glimpses of memory added just enough emotion to really sink in deep. They added to the flow of the story nicely and tied it all in together. Frank's journey from sanity to insanity was most beautifully written. His thought processes and descriptions set the scene excellently. The development was written to perfection; it's as if he went through stages of insanity. The verb tense was vivid beyond comparison!

This surpassed my expectations, that's for sure. You're an amazing writer, but this piece exemplified your creative engineering.

I don't think that my praise is enough for this, 10/10

Shelby

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this one in first person :) I'm just so pleased you liked it, as I wasnt really sure about it when I posted. I thought the memories were too brief, but you've given me a confidence boost :D

thanks so much, Shelby. it means so much to me!

OK, I'm going to be on a high all evening :D you're too nice!

- Marina

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