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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

this was beautiful. absolutely beautiful. i loved this; that much i can express.

the flow of this story contrasted very well with the plot of things. at no point did it seem rushed or paced too quickly. honestly, things seemed to be in the right place. your words choice worked efficiently and your style and artistic design mirrored well.

the development of Frank in particular was quite interesting to witness as a reader. in most cases, characters do not suffer a wild or drastic change in complexity throughout the course of one simple chapter, but it was lovely to read something that portrayed a major development in such a short laspe of time. you made Frank's change realistic and cannon and i have absolutely no complaints with the way Frank worked out.

overall, i thought that you did an amazing job on this entire story. the only suggestion that i have for you is to make things a bit less repetitive. the story itself was not, but the word choice and punctuation was a bit distracting. wonderful job though. this was a very pleasant and enjoyable read for me.

Author's Response: oh thank you so much *blushes* I think this was so hard to write, for me, because it's such a sensitive and difficult change in Frank and Alice. It's a lot harder to do over a short period of time, but I'm so glad that you thought it worked.

I'll go back and revise my word choice and punctuation. I think I've got into a couple of bad habits, and it's difficult to spot when I'm using the same sentence structure etc. but I'll look over it, thanks for pointing that out :)

thanks for reviewing!

- Marina

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