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Review:Inti says:
Oh thank god!

A Rose/Scorpius I can deal with!
I don't mind the pairing in and of itself, but when people write it as though Ron would be completely fine with it, and Draco would be fine with it...just AGHH!

So. This was fantastic. Your characterisation was very, very good in this. You have adult Hermione and Ron absolutely down. A real familiarity and confidence in your writing them comes across.

The only tiny problem is how Rose reacts to Ron. Even though she is angry, the dialogue seems a little bit off somehow. It's almost too controlled, without being icy or cold. Am I making sense?

I don't mean to be negative, because this really is a brilliant one-shot. I wish I could write them as well as you. Great stuff =]

Author's Response: Yes, I completely understand what you mean about Rose's dialogue. I remember thinking the exact same thing when I wrote it. Maybe I'll go back and fix that soon...

Anyway, thank you so much for all your kind words. I've always imagined Ron being bitter about Scorpius as well.

I'm at a loss for words now. Thank you so, so much for your review! You've made my day.
- Rin

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