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Review:collette michelle says:
I really enjoyed this. I read through it twice before picking up on all the little details at the end. I thought it was clever that you had it a mystery that Victoire poisoned Dominique (This is what I picked it up as. If that is not the case I will feel like a fool.) It took a bit of careful reading to completely comprehend that.

And I loved the repetition of the word 'divine'. It's a nice literacy tool, I think the term is. And the last line, sans An eye for an eye, was the perfect ending line.


Bravo, nice job! Especially in the POV it was done, second person is hardly ever written and you did it beautifully.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! The story is purposefully vague, but I expect you realized that anyway ;) You're right, Victoire poisoned Dominique for stealing Teddy from her: the idea of "an eye for an eye" comes from the fact that Dominique steals Teddy from Victoire, so Victoire steals Dominique from Teddy. The repetition of divine shows how terrified Victoire is about what she has done, and the second-to-last line came because I had already put in the sub-title "or how they got away" and I needed a reason for that to be there :) Again, thank you so much for this review, I'm relieved that you enjoyed it! :)


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