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Review:datbenik513 says:
Hi Phoenix,

Some typos I could find after a quick reading:
"against hear bare one" vs " against her bare one",
"Harry ran his hand along her body as kissed her fiercely"
either "as he kissed her" or "and kissed her",
"I know pronounce you" vs "I now pronounce you".

I should say - at least in the first two chapters - you should not be afraid of weak characterization and emotions. I should say both Harry and Elizabeth are absolutely believable.

Every fragment of his previous life Harry remembers, makes his feelings for Elizabeth - together with the plot - more complex, more intriguing. I feel there's more to come, and continue with the next chapter in eager anticipation.


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