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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
Oh my gosh. This was amazing. It actually took my breath away. Second person just is not used enough - it has such an impact on the reader. It's a shame it's a pain to write.

I loved the repetition of 'Dominique is dead' throughout the story, and 'divine' too. The alliteration really makes it hit home, like someone drilling it into you.
It took me a while to get what was going on at the end, but once I got it (at least, I think I have), it was just...wow.

I love Dominique/Teddy as a pairing and it's really unusual, so to see it in a love triangle situation is even better.
Amazing!

Author's Response: Oh, gosh. *blush* This is an amazing review. I'm so, so happy you appreciate second person, but it really isn't a pain to write. It just takes some getting used to, but I really, really love it. :) The repetition of "Dominique is dead" is obviously a sign of how shaken Teddy is that she's dead, whereas the "divine" is proof of how terrified Victoire is now that the deed is done. I do understand that this is hard to understand, but the important thing is that this is for the reader to decide what happened.

I agree, there isn't enough Dominique/Teddy in the world, but the few I know I absolutely love. (The two one-shots that inspired this, and Romina Stephanie's How a Heart Behaves are all superb). Thank you again for this amazing review!

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