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Review:datbenik513 says:
Hi from the forums,

You seem to have a special aptitude for experimenting with different ships. This story of yours, this time on a fully canon-compliant pairing, is a worthwile addendum to Potterverse.

You picture Bellatrix not as the beautiful, insane, reckless woman we know. In your one-shot Bellatrix is depicted simply as a beautiful woman who is very much capable of loving, who can reach everything she wants. I just saw Helena Bonham-Carter all the time before my eyes.

I don't agree with the previous reviewer, you did not over-characterize your heroes. I think the proportions were just right, after all you were not writing an action scene, rather drawing an impressionistic picture.

I have to admit I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

10/10

Cheers,

Zoltan

Author's Response: When I spend a long time writing my fave ships Draco/Luna I sometimes fancy a change lol, so I try my had at other ships, although I very rarely attempt canon for some reason so Bella/ Rodolphus was completly new to me.

I#m really glad you thought Bellatrix was done well, I wasn't sure how people would react to a non- sadistic Bellatrix.

I mentioned previously that I think description is a matter of personal taste, & I think you just proved my point lol. I agree with your comments and I'm happy you could see what I was going for with this one shot.

Thanks very much for taking the time to review, I appreicate the feedback!!


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