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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Wow, that was absolutely incredible! I loved the plot, but the ending was by far the best. It was so perfect, so amazing! And it was written beautifully! Bella's thoughts and fears were perfect, and I especially loved it because she's one of my favorite characters, and you really brought out her personality. Great job!

My only suggestion is to tone down the description a bit. It was little distracting how every aspect of them had to be described, and though you did it beautifully, it was a little much. It's fun to slip in little, un-needed details, like the color of her gloves, but yours was a bit overdone. Not so much as to ruin the story, though! I loved it!!! Great job!!!

~lllb

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it, especially as Bellatrix & Rodolohus are not characters I read or write about! So it's great that you thought I did a good job with her!

I think description is a matter of personal taste. I know exactly what you mean, I sometimes skip pages of books I'm reading when the writer rambles on about the rooms
or clothes etc, other times I don't feel I get enough description.

I disagree with you on that particualr point for this particular one shot, but I can completely understand your view on it & I appreciate the comments.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read & review, I really appreciate it!!

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