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Review:datbenik513 says:
This is one piece of miraculous writing.
Your sentences are beautifully interwoven, just like a spider creates his masterpiece: his web.
Every word, every phrase IS Dominique, not only a mere description of her or her emotions. An astonishingly visual storytelling. First person POV and Present Tense: two more means to enhance the dramatic effect. Yes, it's dramatic. This is Dominique's personal drama, her unanswered love, her constantly being a shadow of her elder sister.

This is the standard of writing I wish I could ever equal. I know I won't. The only thing what remains is to take off my hat and take a deep bow.

Perfect 10. I'm speechless.

Author's Response: oh thank you so much *blush* There really aren't any words to say how grateful I am. Writing is something I love, but I get so terribly insecure when I post. I was sure this was a pile of rambling rubbish! but thank you, I'm sure I don't deserve it.

And don't be so negative. Keep practicing, you'll get better. it's never out of reach. If i can do it, so can you. I haven't been writing long :)

- Marina x

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