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Review:Vanished Petunia says:
You know, the plot itself is fine; however, much of the conversation between Dean and Ginny is halted and unnatural. Normal people don't talk that way. In fact...all of it sounds haughty and forced. Dean - how he talks and his characterizations in this piece - seems like a prissy fool. This story is written like an essay, with no contractions to be found. The language altogether is antiquated and just odd. I'm really sorry! I almost never write bad reviews, but I had to this time.

Author's Response: oh, that is fine! i love receiving all suggestions and ideas. getting a review that contains advice is influential and exciting and it will honestly help me as a writer. do not feel bad about it! i am glad that you reviewed in this manner. i do have to agree with you, seeing as the dialogue seemed a bit forced and unnatural, but i did that purposefully in a way. Dean and Ginny are both unnatural characters and i find that writing tension and awkwardness between them was the way that i had to go with this. thank you once again for the wonderful review. i mean it. i love getting feedback that will help me in the future.

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