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Review:Joanne K says:
They're finally in the US!!

I think perhaps the plane flight dragged out a little too much, but mostly the pace was okay and enough was happening to keep the flow moving along.

I loved the reference to the Deathly Hallows and it makes me wonder if they will come into play later in the story.

I already like Uncle Jack, even after only a brief introduction and I look forward to seeing more of his character.

I'll PM you my Aussie comments as usual.

As always I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing the US part. Probably because I live in NY, lol. It was fun because I got to put stuff in there that I actually knew a lot about, like the spiedies.

Anyway, yeah, the flight was a bit long, but all future flights will be shorter, or will have somewhat significant plot points in them.

The Hallows really don't play much of a role in this story, but they do in my Albus series. I've thought about writing a story about Walter & Jack's search for the Hallows, but I've put that idea in with all my other ideas that may or may not actually get written.

Uncle Jack is a cool guy. He'll be in a lot of the future chapters; more than just the ones that take place in the US.

Thanks for reading and reviewing and for the Aussie comments! :)

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