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Review:Manwe Valarian says:
Sorry, no tears from me. With a one shot you are short on time to get me involved. Fics need perspective, too much angst or too much fluff gets boring over the duration of the fic. Having one chapter read at a time this aspect isn't that obvious.

One question that wasn't addressed: Why did Ginny chose Draco over Harry. You didn't state that book six was disreguarded. That could have been addressed with Ginny's POV.

As I look at your prompts, I chuckle at the sunshine aspect. People die in flowery fields and sunny days. Pain is always around us, not in the dark rainy nights of our minds.

Author's Response: Yeah, I normally write for a D/G only sight, so I've gotten lax with explaining why are together. As for the dark/stormy part, I actually forgot to add it in the first time I wrote the story, my beta had to remind me to add it in. Thanks for your review!

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