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Review:Anonymous says:
I can understand your predicament with the whole sing, sung, etc. I was trying to think of other words but couldn't come up with any, until you wrote that she shouted...that's when I thought belted. Common term, especially in musical theater. Think of words that maybe describe the sound of their voices, like trumpeted, screeched, etc. Now that I think of it, most words like that would describe bad singing...

I would say, for the most part though, you don't need to say that they're singing. Maybe just at the emotional points of the character.

Hope this helped a bit.

Author's Response: Thank you!! After I typed the first chapter, I was like "but sung doesn't really cover how he says it--and how he says it reflects his personality." But it's all covered now. Thanks!!

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