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Review:vballinamazing says:
lol i love this story! lol. only there was some inconsistency with the ways how they were talking ya know like when its scripted and when it is actually there opinion. but other than that it was a FABULOUS story. 10/10

Author's Response: Actually, it's supposed to be like that. The "writers" (myself and the ghost writer), speak like a script, and the "characters" (Hermione and Draco), speak like it's written in a book. It's all done that way specifically to show the difference between writer and character. If everyone spoke the same way, it wouldn't work if the writers tried to "enter the story".

But I'm so glad you read it and also enjoyed it! And thanks so much for the review!


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