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Review:eVille says:
The idea for this story is wonderful. Never has anyone been so creative to think of something that's done everyday, but they tend to skip over it. This review is for all chapters btw.

Overall, it's a great idea. Develop your characters a bit more and while the muggleness is fine, I do believe that people would be able to understand the story if you left out some muggle things.

As for the dance party, I can tell you're a Jonas Brothers fan. That's also along the lines of muggleness, so instead you could have wrote that they used a wizard station and that while the song's were unfamiliar they had good beats.

Your story is wonderful and this review is merely a suggestion so do not take anything to heart. Can not wait for the next chapter.

~eVille~

-10/10

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