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Review:Gutterflower says:
This is amazing. Not only is it brilliantly written, but I love how you're focusing on a period that people often neglect. I like the portrayal of James and Sirius, especially his issues with the house and himself - it's more believable than the usual happy acceptance of Gryffindor-dom. I also like the relationship between the boys, how you're developing their friendship slowly. You've given James Potter a really apt history and personality, for once I can really see a reason for him befriending Sirius. I can't wait to read the rest. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I've had a lot of fun trying to portray Sirius. I think, up until Hogwarts, he more or less followed his parents' rules. It's been fun having him struggle after meeting James, though I worry sometimes that he's back and forth to the point of being confusing.

So glad you can see why James might give him a chance. That was the hardest part - to give reason for them to talk in the first place. I wanted to do something different than the usual "all the compartments are full, can I sit with you."

Thank you so much for the review! This story seems to be lacking in them :)


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