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Review:Grendel says:
Haha, I liked this one too.

I'd honestly not really given too much thought to how Lily and James really did end up together. I'd looked into several fics of them fighting, or together after the fact, but I guess sometimes it's just too hard to capture how James could've made that 180 degree personality turn.

I think this fic really captured that kind of feel of reformation and realization (wow that sounded corny even to me) in a really humorous and cute way.

Oh, and I wanted to say, I absolutely love this line:

'He sighed.
It was a large sigh.
It was a "ginormo" sigh.
It was the biggest sigh ever.
Or maybe it was a yawn.'

That made me crack up. Along with all the examples of Marauder-friendship. I think they're just the cutest thing ever and that also reminds me that I love how James can seemingly be self conscious and afraid of embarassment, which leads to his bullying (at least in my mind, I'm inferring) and a reluctance to talk to girls in a serious setting - which, of course, would be why he always jokes around with Lily and unintentionally pushes her away - and yet can be so egotistical it's not funny.

A+

-Grendel

Author's Response: Once again, you rock. (Haha, geddit, Edward = rock hard...hah, hah...heh...okay.)

I actually wrote this one for a challenge. I had never given it much thought before either before that though. As you know, I love the marauders, my favorite era, and probably the most fun to write. They are basically my 3 best friends and I in "cool, male, British" format. (Laura is Peter, I'm Sirius, but we can talk more about that tomorow. :-) )

Wow, it's kinda funny how far you read into my writing. It's nice, for once. And infer all you want! It only leads to more ideas, AKA plot bunnies. I'll tell you tomorrow what I have planned next for my good boys.

And you, my dear, get an A+ as well, for your superb review.


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