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Review:Jacqueline Noir says:
Oh, I suspected the end since he asked her to marry him.:)
This a pretty good story, especially the end, but I'm just too biased on Draco Malfoy to see him a younger version of Lucius. This looked more like a Dramione to me, than a Rose/Scorpius. But a good story nonetheless.
I believe it was a little bit hard to present their whole story in a one-shot, but you managed that pretty well.
All in one, a very sad, but beautiful story. I would have liked you to give us more details about Rose, though.

Author's Response: A lot of people have a strong opinion on Malfoy... unfortunately I'm not his biggest fan so I was biased as well. I wrote this before I had fully understood his character, so if I was to write it again I maybe would have been a bit softer on him!

I'll work on Rose, I just didnt want it to be too long. I've been considering splitting it up for a while.

Thank you so much for the feedback :D


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