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Review:padfoot4ever says:
Hi,
Sorry it's taken me so long to give you this review you requested, but I've been very busy!
Okay, so I'm going to be a bit critical, but hopefully constructive at the same time! It was a bit short - I think you could have been slightly more descriptive, but not too much more because nobody wants to be sufficated by the descriptions of people and what they're wearing! But maybe we could have been introduced to Lauren in a better way, or to Albus and James. Also, maybe someone has already said it, I think Rose would refer to her mother as 'Mum' rather than 'Mom'.
Try not to put A/N's in the middle of the text. Some people might find it annoying.
I think you have a good start here! I generally don't read Rose/Scorpius stories. I really like that Kreacher is in the story. He was cool - I like him more than Dobby!
well done! :D

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