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Review:Liam R says:
You wrote this in a state of near writer's block? Really? It's my favourite chapter so far! The game's afoot! ^_^

I liked Lily's reaction. She seemed like a small child who'd just had a very bad nightmare. I can totally imagine that happening. Just having her scream and break down, thinking that her dad was dead.

It can't be Hagrid though. I mean, seriously, even Draco couldn't suspect Hagrid.

Then again, there are probably a few more people left in Hogwarts than we actually know about.

This is so interesting.

Author's Response: *hides* Yes, empty-headed stories like this do work to get the words coming again. It was a horrible essay-induced block. But, I'm very glad that you like this chapter best. ^_^ This story is tricky to write, and it's good to know that it's getting better as it goes along. :P

Lily's going to be the one who has the most trouble with the story/reality divide, even though she is already 10+ years old. With everything being "all well" in the world, she doesn't know or understand death very well at all.

lol! Draco's willing to suspect anyone. :P He's that desperate to clear his own name, though you're right that Hagrid killing Harry would be difficult to fathom.

Thank you very much for the review! ^_^


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