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Review:Liam R says:
Ooh, this is getting really interesting. Unfortunately I had to go to bed last night before I could finish reading the first five chapters, I was too tired ^_^

This chapter was definitely the best. I can't help but think that Harry was killed by somebody close to him. I doubt Neville, but it's always a possibility. Aha.

Your descriptions are just fantastic. Their straight to the point and enjoyable to read. They really set the scene, and I could imagine with perfect clarity everything that was going on in this chapter.

At first, even though I liked the idea of this being a story told to a bunch of kids, I was unsure of it. But now I'm glad that it is, because I think certain elements of this story, like the autopsy on Harry's body, would be too far-fetched if it wasn't told that way.

But this is a great story. It's a true mystery.

10/10

Author's Response: The best? That's great to hear, thank you! ^_^ It shows that maybe I'm getting into this story more than I feel like I am, or at least that I'm understanding how I want to this story to work. Anyways, Neville was a strong possibility at first, but it would be way too OOC to make him the killer - he does make an interesting suspect, though. :P We'll see what Draco and Teddy do for him in coming chapters.

Definitely having the kids around creates extra wiggle-room in terms of plot and presentation. You're right that the story would be very out there without the frame of this being a story told to a bunch of pre-teens. ;)

Thank you very much for the review. All of your reviews are wonderful to receive - you manage to touch on so many important points to the story, which helps me in my planning process for future chapters. ^_^

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