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Review:Liam R says:
Gah, I'm so tired. But I'm forcing myself to read this now, I have to read it before I go to bed ^_^

It's getting more and more interesting all the time. I like how you're deliberately making the chapters short, it makes the story alot more suspenseful. And even if it isn't intentional, I still like it ^_^

Your characterisation of Snape and Dumbledore is spot on. Totally fantastic. It's just the kind of things they would say, and I love it.

I love your descriptions aswell. Their just ... woah ^_^

And I think it's great how you don't reveal how things happen (like Draco being caught) but have the kids making up what happens as they go along, it makes for a very entertaining read.

I'm jealous of how you write so well, I really am ^_^


Author's Response: The shorter chapters are intentional, both because it's easier on me and because it works for the genre, like you said, creating suspense. It's wonderful that you like that and the characterizations. For some reason, Dumbledore is not that hard to write for in this story, same with Snape. Maybe it's because I'm not writing too deeply into their characters, adding my own stuff, but who knows. ;) I'm just really happy that you like it.

And that bit about having the kids figure things out is rather lazy on my part. :P It looks impressive, but really it's just me trying to get out of intricate plotting. But if you think it's great, then of course I meant to do it. All part of the plan. 0;-)

Thank you very much! Your reviews are wonderfully uplifting to read. ^_^

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