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Review:Liam R says:
This story is better than I'd actually imagined, and believe me, I imagined it to be pretty good.

I love how you've got the kids interupting Teddy. It seemed very real, and it reminded me of a younger me where my parents would tell me stories and I'd constantly interrupt them asking about it. Aha ^_^

I don't get how Rose calls Ginny mum, but she calls Ron father. I just don't get that. I'm not insulting your work, I'm really not, I'm just curious and a tad confused.

I liked Neville, as well, I have to admit. Yeah, I really did like Neville, he was written very well, even if he was only in it for the last part of the chapter. It reminded me of the GoF film where he's like "Oh my God, I killed Harry Potter."

I wonder why Harry wasn't on the train though.
That's strange ...


Author's Response: *queen of inconsistency* Will fix the Rose thing for sure! Thanks for pointing it out. =D

Better than you imagined, eh? That's great to hear! The prologue doesn't reflect how the actual story will turn out, someone else mentioned the differences between prologue and story before. Flipping back and forth between Teddy and the mystery is fun to write - it started as an experiment, but came to be one of the most important parts of the story. :D

That line of Neville's was in mind when I started writing this. It totally made the GoF movie!

Thanks again for reviewing! ^_^

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