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Review:Joanne K says:
You've definitely got me addicted to this story. You write Amy so well, it is easy to feel like I am seeing things from her POV and it is easy to empathise with her. There were a couple of minor grammar errors throughout, and of course I've already PMed you about all the Aussie-isms. It is a very interesting plot and I can't wait to read more. (And I just love the title by the way, it is just so fitting!)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so much. I found it difficult to write at first because this was my first attempt at first person, but it got easier as I went on. I'm glad you're seeing things from her POV and empathizing with her. That was what I was going for. :)

Thanks again for your help with the Aussie-isms and the grammar.

My sister, Dancer_of_Starlight (Alice_Dancer on the forums), actually came up with the title. I'm horrible with titles. I'll let her know that you like it. :) Thanks so much for your review! I usually update this every Sunday.

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