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Review:Pretty Purple Pelican says:
What a fantastic idea. I mean, the whole she could possibly be in love with him because he's practically his twin thing. That's just phenomenal. There are a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes. You miss a couple commas here and there, but that's not too big of a deal.

Because your not welcome here
It should be "you're" for "you are".

I really enjoyed this. It was a nice, human piece. Hmmm, I was trying to think of a song for your final piece, but there's not much coming to mind just yet. I can PM you if I think of anything, if you'd like. :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, spelling isn't really my strong point...and I do type it in a word document, but for some reason it won't do grammar check. I will start to type it in Microsoft word now that I have it. I will go through and re-read and correct it. Thanks for the tips on that though.

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I worked pretty hard and this, and if you do come up with a song that kinda fits, you can PM. That'd be really awesome! My display name on the forums is Nymphie Tonks, just in case that makes it easier to find.

Thanks for reading! Thanks for the review!

~Grim (tonks1247)

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