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Review:Georgia Weasley says:
As far as plot and characterizations go, this was a very well written story. The emotions and details of the interactions between Bellatrix and her family members (even the cameo appearance of Sirius) are very well done. I do feel that the second person POV is a little awkward, and might sound a little better in third, but that may just be my own bias. Otherwise, I enjoyed seeing the teenage Lucius and Narcissa, with their problems with communication already starting. This is an excellent story, and you should be very proud of it.

Author's Response: Hey,

This story was really a challenge for me to write something different. I don't usually do romance fics especially with characters like these. I understand what you're saying about second person, it does sound awkward at times but for some reason, I thought it suited this story.

I'm thrilled that you thought the characterisations were well done, I had the timeline shifted a bit to fit in Sirius. I was a bit worried about writing Bellatrix though.

As for Lucius and Narcissa's issues, I guess they had to start somewhere:)

I really am proud of my one-shot.

Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Lia.


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