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Review:Foxtrott says:
Hello :)

I found some grammatical mistakes again: "Your footsteps are softer then Remus's," he replied matter-of-factly, not aware of Remusís shared smile with Hermione. " 'then' should have been 'than' because a comparison is being made. :)

Other than that, I haven't spotted anything else, probably because I was caught up in the story. :) Very good description here, although the dialogues were rather chunky and Sirius suddenly seemed extremely mature and long-winded. >< Just a suggestion, once again, your chapter is nice as it is.

:) Good luck with the rest of your story :)

-Foxtrott

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