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Review:Foxtrott says:
Hi! First of all, I'd like to apologise for taking so very, very long. D: Okay, I don't really have a valid reason, I've just been very lazy. But now I'm regretting it after seeing what i passed up for so long!

This is really good, the plot if original. I find crossovers a great read if they are written well, and this definitely was a great read.

I only spotted this, though: No. Draco replied flatly. It should've been a comma after 'no'.

Other than that, this introductory chapter was great :D

Author's Response: Hi Foxtrott!
Don't apologize for the delay...I'm quite lazy too, especially after the holidays. And I do truly appreciate your review all the same ^_^

Thanks so much for pointing out that typo-I'm going to fix it right away. Gah! It seems that no matter how many times I proofread a chapter, one mistake always slips by ;)

Again, thanks a million for your great feedback. I hope you have a wonderful weekend!

Best,
celticbard


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