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Review:Liz says:
Very good story, I loved it.

The last line would make more sense if I understood what you meant by 'it.' From looking at the sentence one would think you were referring to Lily holding her breath, but I imagine you were actually referring to love? Her love for her son? Hoping that would be enough?

But yes, other than the last line this is great. I really enjoy it. The way you wrote James and Lily seems very true to character and you can just feel the love they radiate.

Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: She's holding her breath hoping that it will save him and that her love will be enough.

Thank you for the review!

~LB


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