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Review:Hermione Potter452 says:
WOWZA! that was really interesting! and surprising! you write really really well. your grammar is perfect and i like your descriptions of things. the only thing i'd say otherwise is that i think you should've said something at the end as to why she didn't choose Ron in the end, or something. it kinda seemed a little random, her not being with Ron, but with Seamus instead. but other than that, AMAZING job, i dare say! and no, i didn't catch that it wasn't Ron before the end... haha. i'm too dim. unless it's really obvious in a way that i can catch, i usually believe whatever the writer is telling me. hahhaa. but no, you hid it REALLY well. i applaud you for your first fanfic! i hope you keep writing!!

~ Danica

Author's Response: Aw jeez. Thanks for the amazing review! I'll be grinning everytime I look at this story now. The end did seem slightly untied...well, I'll go back and edit. I have a couple ideas. But, again, thank you for the quite grand review! And I'll def. have encouragement for my next piece now :)

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