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Review:AddysenMalfoy says:
Hey Em!

Long time no contact, at all. I just read this first chapter and, I have to say, I'm intrigued. Is it a girl? How about I read on for myself and find out? Haha.

How have you been keeping yourself? I miss your constructive criticism! I'm sorry I haven't come to you with a chapter to beta for, basically, years. I never took your name off my summery as beta, though. I guess I'm just impatient and want the chapters posted like now, and then edit them after. It's a strange system, I know.

If you ever feel like taking a tickity-boo at the story again let me know. I feel horrible for always leaving such long periods in between our contact.

Now, back to your story. I love how you've incorporated so much British slag into this one. It's so fun to read! Although, I will have to look up what 'kip' means, assuming it's Brit slag. Also, have you ever see the movie 'Detroit Rock City'? When I found out your elf's name was Tripp I instantly imagined a burn-out with long hair and a toque on. It made me laugh.

Anyway, off to chapter two I go. Talk to you soon enough!

Cheers hun,

-Addysen

Author's Response: Hey Addysen,

Yes it has been a long time with no contact but it's good to hear from you again. And hooray for stumbling upon one of my stories. Haha

Thanks for noticing my attempt at British slang. I think I did an alright job of trying to incorporate it. It was somewhat of a challenge as the story goes on because I had to remind myself to say "mate" instead of "dude". As for "kip".I honestly have no idea if it's British or not. I want to say it is only because I go to my British friend from this site with all sorts of questions on what certain things I've read are or what they mean.

As for the movie, I don't believe I've seen it. I'll have to look it up later to see if the summary rings any bells.

But so good to hear from you again and thanks for the review.

Emilie
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