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Review:ginnyfan4life says:
I am so glad you decided to post this, finally! (wow, as if I'm getting excited about a Hr/R fic... what is happening to me?)

I thought it was a really great first chapter. I really like that Draco's personality is canon - he's a bit of an arse - the way he should be :D But then what reason would Hermione have for marrying him? especially with his attitude towards the Weasleys; I hope you show why, if for nothing other than to settle my curiosity hehehe

Does eggy bread = french toast? lol

One mistake that i noticed was:

“No, go Hermione, it’s okay. Just at the moment there was an insistent tapping at the window.

- needs a closing " but I didn't see any other mistakes.

Adding in Ron's letter from 3rd year was really sweet.

I like that you got right into the main story, I expected that the first chapters to not have Ron in them, but I guess they will.

The only thing I thought would be good to add is a bit more feelings/ thoughts into Ginny's POV becuase there is so much more detail in Hermione's and I think it would improve the overall effect a bit. I understand why Ginny didn't outwardly freak out when Hermione told her Ron but I think that you should show her internal struggle a bit more. - that could just be me wanting you to turn this into a Ginny fic though :P


10/10 can't wait to see chap 2.

~Ginnyfan4life

Author's Response: i will go more into Ginny's emotions in the next chapter, but maybe i could go back and add more.
I can't believe i left that " out, going back to fix that now. Must be due to my injury (yes i am whining about my finger now)
eggy bread is french toast yes.
There will be more on why she married Draco in future chapters, i pomise.
So glad that you are getting excited about a R/Hr fic :)
ps thanks for reviewing and for the awesome banner!

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