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Review:confusedlover says:
for some reason i am not logged in, but i am here to review anyway.

i really thought that this was a wonderful story. it was so deep and intricate, and it really seemed to hit me. the beauty of the plot, the tenderness of the characters- it just all really drew me in, and that is something that can be hard to accomplish.

this story had a nice pace to it and it did not feel rushed in any way. i noticed one little error, but it is nothing that a simple edit cannot fix.

overall, i thought that you did a wonderful job on this. the whole idea that this entire chapter is in the form of a letter is quite appealing. you kept this in the right lettering format, and i really have nothing terrible to correct you on. this was a very pleasurable read. keep writing.

Author's Response: Phew - really glad to hear that you were able to really get into the story.

Ah yes, the typos and such; when I get some spare time I'll definitely go back and try to get rid of those.

Glad you found it pleasurable to read. Thanks for the feedback!

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