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Review:Leie says:
Interesting idea but very confusing. Why can they get a timeturner? Where was it? Why would it not be in the DoM? It just doesn't make any sense. It wouldhave been better if one of their parents were using it for work and they nicked it. They could have been near where the titanic launched anyway and have decided to go. They also wouldn't have had to have known that it would crash. Really, they've all grown up in the magic world, the titanic wouldn't be common knowledge.

The class prediciment is interesting, but having all girls 1st class is a bit odd. Why not have them all a different class?

They also act a bit oddly. Their characters aren't padded out very well.

Also, James falling in "love" so fast is just plain weird. There is no progression, no interest first... Let alone the other reaction to it. So he likes a girl, why is everyone going so nuts over it? It doesn't mean diddly squat, why would Rose want to wake someone up, is she really so impulsize. Does she really have such little control?

Your characters just seem too emotive, so over the top that it feels unbelievable.

Author's Response: You raise some interesting points. It feels like so long ago I wrote this and I feel like it's so different from the way I write now, because now I write original stuff and I'm much happier with it.

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