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Review:Lily Roselyn says:
Huh. Well this is something. I really like the idea of Regulus writing Sirius a letter, even if Sirius never actually got it. The girl, too, that was good, and very original.

You have a few grammar mistakes. Here's what I'd do:
Just read it out loud to yourself, everyone always says that, I know, but I think it really helps, especially with flow, etc.

Anyway, this was great, I really like it C:

Cheers

Author's Response: That's good to hear!

Thanks for the suggestions, I'll definitely have to go back and root those out sometime, and try reading it out loud.

Thanks!


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