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Review:SpringTime says:
Hello, here to review. The main thing that I caught was the end when you swtiched into first person...I wasn't sure where that had come from.
It is a sweet idea for a story, the reconciliation of the Black sisters sans loony toons (i.e. Bella).
I also liked the memory that you included of their childhood...it is almost sad that they were so close and Andromeda didn't even say good bye. I know I would have been hurt.
All in all a nice short hoilday story, kudos on even attempting one, as I am not sure that I could be so brave. This was was different from the others I have read because it focused so much more on the new beginning and less on the new year (I hope that makes sense).
Anyway, great job.

Author's Response: Hey SpringTime! I'm sorry it took me so long to reply! School has been busy. Well, I thought it was always first person - I just didn't use the open clues of "I" and slang throughout. I'll keep that in mind though for the next first person narrative I write! Thank you for all your sweet comments!! I tried to make their relationship as real as possible and like you, if I were in Cissy's position, I WOULD be hurt...and a hard nut to crack if the said person who wronged me wanted my forgiveness.

I think it made sense to me: it focused more on a new beginning rather than the holiday, right? I'm sorry if I did take it the wrong way!

Thank you so much!


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