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Review:CrazyForYou says:
I really like the way you start out. I like the references to the townspeople and the way they start their new year. Props to you for telling a story in the present tense, it's a nice variation.

For this story being as short as it is, you accomplish a lot of character development, congratulations. I like how Cissy goes from cold to tender and Andromeda feels younger because she makes peace with her past.

While this could be a typo/error: "until ‘Dromeda’s heart gave away at a tender age." I like it. I think it shows that Andromeda gained youth as she got to know her sister and found herself with family once again.

Really cute!

You have a couple of sentences/phrases that seem awkward, but overall I like your story for its simplicity and feelings.

Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to do something different, even if it was a risk, as I hadn't written anything in such a huge time. Plus I thought it would be more powerful due to who was narrating (Ted.) I'll have to check for those awkward sentences, but really, thank you for the brilliant review!

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