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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
This is very impressive in just a short span of words. I really enjoyed the way you started the story, bringing the reader in from the perspective of the larger world into the specific perspective of one person. I love the way you give a sense of place and time, and you even show various things happening in real time despite the fact that the piece is narrative. You show the progression of change in the relationship between teh sisters, and it is very realistic. I also LOVE your choice of words and allusions and such... You have a very keenly developed writing style. Oh, and is Ted the narrator? I love it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you JL!! Well one of my favorite shows is the ABC show "Desperate Housewives" and from the beginning I loved the prologue and epilogue of the episodes, so I wanted it to start off with that sort of feeling with a Jane Austen aura to it. As for the sisters, I want to thank you for saying that! I worked really hard to try and make it as realistic as possible but still maintain that storybook quality. Lol, thanks about the allusion comment. I did some research for my Ted/Andromeda story and I discovered there was this whole myth on Andromeda and her knight in shining armor, Perseus, who freed her from the chained rock (apparently she was going to be a sea monster's breakfast xD.) And YES!! Ted is the narrator. You are the first reviewer who discovered the real narrator! I'm so happy!!! Thank you so much for your wonderful review, it made my day!

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